Just finished my multi-media thesis at University of Michigan. Now entering the real world. Here's what I'm doing now.
Meg--This is sounding very strong. You're very close. I'd say do what you can to gather some street and edge of highway sounds asap (see my other message) as your bed of sound under Jay's voice.I can hear some places where we could use a pause. We can also talk about a possible intro from you if you choose to go that direction.-stephanie